Nice image!

Yes, that's it (simply described (simply altered one way or another)).
And I think that --esp. for tying to a pole, in contrast to some flexible object--
this structure is less secure under load --to it I'd finish with a stopper,
if not replacing the final
Half-hitch with a stopper as said above.
(I don't trust the
Clove h. to stay tied.)
Friction hitches can be tricky, and I have some skepticism about them,
in general. So much seems to depend on materials (structure, fibre,
condition, shape, flexibility, relative sizes) and forces. I recall using
a
Hedden hitch in (I think) half-inch solid/flexible polyester (lubed!)
cable-hauling tape in which it held my weight initially, but on subsequent
attempts to stand on this it slid (!!?). And recently in playing around
with the
ProhGrip / Blake's Hitch, I found that I needed to slightly
extend the spiral of the rope coming into the knot in order for
it to grip and then grip harder w/higher load. That said, I'll remark
that it seems a piece of common knowledge that with standard
materials of an 8mm? kernmantle rope tied in a Prusik hitch around
11-13mm kernmantle slippage will occur at some high load. (It's
of course possible that this "knowledge" arises from one reported
testing. And in some cases of such testing where slippage is seen,
the testing is done on a slow-pull device that takes a while to build
up force on the slipped knot, but with actual use and some mass
making that load, there'd be no such reduction in force upon the
slippage --rather, some momentum of the load.)
Also, there isn't much presentation and research made for using some
combination of friction hitches -- e.g., a structure like what is
called the
"Camel hitch" but in place of the
Clove hitch there is
a
Rolling hitch (or other friction hitch) and the load of course is
taken in the usual direction (for what I'll call
"away-end" loading
-- that of the
Rolling h., e.g.). As shown in the OP, the loading
is to the
"near-end" , as is the
Klemheist &
ProhGrip.
--dl*
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