Then I show what I think Dan is suggesting in the third diagram
(but in the front so you can see more clearly what goes where).
No, but in "no" you bring some further options to the table!
Your (mis)interpretation of my knot l00ks good, too --better !?
Again --and visual or not, words have pretty definite meanings--,
begin as BOOKS SHOW : S.Part's U-fold set against object;
and then next U-fold is cast AROUND(outside, surrounding) this
--not my reversing of these into "Tumble H." orienation.
So, this is the trad. way, SO FAR.
BUT THEN pull the 2nd-placed, surrounding U-fold
back up through the S.Part's,
pulling it so that it casts hard turns into S.Part's U-fold
(much like Ashley's shown Slingstone hitch #1697 & #272).
ANd one might do some size adjustments here.
Now, the slip-tuck goes out through the hauled-back-up
U-fold,
and the S.Part's hard bearing turns around the "frame"
of the 2nd-cast/brought-up U-fold, and less against
the slip-tuck which is pulled into this "frame".
Release might be less "quick/clean" as some others,
requiring perhaps alternating pulling of Tail & S.Part
to get it free. But I think it avoids *traps* such as
putting in a finely nipping loop that alas can continue
finely nipping/holding, 'a la sheepshank, when one
has hoped that the overall structure will spill!
(NB : pulling on line well removed from the hitch
can be over surfaces that impede good delivery
of tension up into the knot (thinking of canyoneers
and rope running over rock).
--dl*
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